Excerpt from

Maren and the Story Breaker

Prologue

From The Book of First Castings

Before the first kingdom raised its stones, before the sea knew the moon, the gods walked upon the high places of the world.

They were deathless and vast, clothed in storm and star, and where their feet rested, mountains lifted their backs from the deep. Where they spoke, rivers cut paths through the dark earth. Where they turned their faces, morning came.

In the first age, Aurel of the high sun looked upon the clay of the lower places and said that the world was bright, but no eye had yet received its light. So Aurel bent over the red earth and set light behind a closed lid, that the creature might wake and know day from dark.

Then Marith of the deep waters looked upon the clay and said that the world moved, but no blood yet moved within a house of flesh. So Marith opened a red river beneath the creature’s skin and salted it with the memory of every sea, that the creature might thirst, bleed, and return at last to the earth that bore it.

Then Veyra of the upper winds looked upon the clay and said that the world had voices, but no throat had yet answered them. So Veyra placed breath inside the hollow of the creature and shaped a door beneath its tongue, that the creature might call across distance, cry warning into danger, sing over the sleeping, and name what had no name.

Then Orun of root and stone looked upon the clay and said that the world endured, but no body had yet learned the burden of standing. So Orun hid bone beneath the creature’s softness and set strength along its spine, that the creature might rise from the dust and leave the mark of its feet upon the ground.

Then Nymera of the long night looked upon the clay and said that the world ended each day and began again, but no living thing had yet trusted darkness. So Nymera placed sleep behind the creature’s eyes and dreams beneath its waking, that the creature might pass through shadow without vanishing.

Thus, the gods made the first mortal from what they ruled, and when the breath entered, the clay opened its eyes.

The mortal rose beneath the watching heavens. It stood unsteady upon the earth. It lifted one hand toward the light that had made it and reached as though it might gather dawn in its fingers.

And then it wept.

The sound went up from the mortal and entered the high places. It passed through the courts of the gods, through the pillars of cloud, through the chambers where thunder slept. It touched the hidden fire inside them, and the thrones of the deathless shook.

For the gods had made a creature that could lose what it loved and still reach for it. They had made a creature that could want what might destroy it. They had made a creature that could fear the dark before the dark had harmed it, rage against the hand that wounded it, laugh with blood in its mouth, and sing beside a grave.

Then the gods understood that they had made a thing more perilous than mountains, more disobedient than seas, more enduring than flame.

They had made a soul.

In their vastness, the gods loved the mortal. In their wisdom, they feared it. For the feeling within themselves, once struck by the mortal cry, no longer lay quiet. It moved in them as weather moves over water. It rose without command. It answered without permission.

Aurel felt the heat of delight and did not know how to contain it. Marith felt the pull of longing and found the seas had begun to obey it. Veyra felt dread pass through the winds, and every leaf in the world trembled. Orun felt grief settle in the stones, and the roots drank sorrow from the graves that had not yet been dug. Nymera felt fury wake inside the dark, and the night itself sharpened around the sleeping.

The gods had made feeling flesh, and flesh had awakened feeling in the gods.

So they gathered upon the first high mountain, where the earth came nearest the high places, and they judged the fire within them. They did not call it evil, for it had made the mortal precious. They did not call it holy, for it had made the mortal dangerous. They named it too great to remain whole in any immortal breast, and in their fear, and in their mercy, and in the pride that wears both faces, they reached into themselves and drew the ruling emotions out.

What they tore from themselves became the Spirits.

The Spirits stood upon the lower earth, formed of divine fire and mortal answer, each one born from the place where the deathless had looked upon the mortal and found themselves moved.

Then the gods said, “Let the high places remain ours, for we have set the courses of the world. Let the sun keep its road. Let the sea keep its depth. Let the root keep its patience. Let the wind keep its wandering. Let the night keep its gate. But let the mortal heart be governed by those who know its fires, lest the creature be consumed by what was awakened within.”

Yet the gods saw that the soul could not be ruled as the tide was ruled. A wave may be drawn by the moon, and the seed may open when the season commands it, but the soul had been made with a door inside itself. It could receive a summons and still refuse to comply. It could hear wisdom and still hunger for ruin. It could be warned of the pit and still step near enough to look down.

So the gods did not bind the Spirits to the mortal by chain or yoke. They bound them by story.

For a law may command the hand, but a story enters before the hand has chosen. A law may say do not, and the body may obey while the heart remains unchanged. But a story places a road beneath the foot, a hunger in the mouth, a shadow at the door, and a cost waiting at the end. A story teaches the soul to know itself by what it reaches for.

Then the gods opened the first silence and spoke the fables into being. Laid into the deep grain of the world, where riverbeds remember their turns and trees keep the shape of old weather. The gods set them in hearth smoke, in cradle songs, in the marks animals left beside roads, in the dreams before dawn. They placed them where mortals would find them.

And the gods said, “Let the fables be doors, that feeling may enter the world with meaning. Let every wanting have a path. Let every path have a turning. Let every turning bear consequence.”

So it was that the Spirits governed not by throne alone, but by fable. Where a tale was told, a path was shaped. Where a symbol was honored, a fire was given form. Where a mortal came to the turning of a choice, the old stories gathered around it like witnesses at a gate.

For choice was the first authorship given to flesh.

A mortal could not choose the hour of its birth, nor the body that bore it, nor the winter, nor the flood, nor the grave waiting under every field. But when the road divided, the mortal could lift its foot. When the cup was offered, the mortal could drink or turn away. When the wound called for blood, the mortal could answer with blade or mercy. And whatever the mortal chose, consequence followed after.

The gods looked upon consequence and saw that it was not punishment only. It was a seed. It was a shadow. It was a harvest. A word spoken in anger could become a war long after the speaker was dust. A kindness offered in hunger could become bread for a another. A door opened could become a kingdom’s ruin, or its rescue, and no mortal could know the whole shape of the story while standing at the hinge.

And the gods said, “Let every choice bear weight, and let every weight bend the tale that carries it.”

So fate was not made as a chain. Fate was made as a thread. The gods stretched them through the lives of mortals, not to rob the soul of choosing, but to give each choice something to move. For a step taken upon empty air is no step at all, and a choice without consequence is only a wish spoken into silence.

The Spirits took up the threads of feeling, each according to its fire, and the fables taught mortals how to name the pull upon them. Mischief loosened the knot on what could bless or break. Temptation asked what hunger might become if fed. Grief filled the vessel of the passed. Dread begged for what waited beyond sight. Fury asked what peace had cost the weak. Delight rang bright.

Then the gods withdrew to the high places, where sun and sea and root and wind and night continued in their courses. They did not cease to love the mortal, but their love became vast as weather and distant as stars. The nearness of the mortal heart belonged to the Spirits, and the teaching of the mortal heart belonged to the fables.

And the gods said, “Let the stories be remembered when the mountain is dust. Let them pass from elder to child, from priest to beggar, from hearth to field, from kingdom to kingdom. Let every telling carry the first breath of our making, though no mouth may hold the whole of it.”

Thus, it is held in the first doctrine: the gods remain in the high places, and the Spirits remain in the lower world, and between them the mortal soul walks the road of choice and consequence.

Every story bears a boundary, and every boundary remembers the hand that made it. Should there come a soul who can see the wall of the tale and lay bloodied fingers upon its edge, the fables shall tremble in their bindings, and what was written may no longer remain law.

And endings quickly become beginnings.

1: Untitled

A new story opened beneath Maren Greenbriar’s feet, each step striking the blankness with a soft, papery thunder.

Words rose wet and shining from the page, newly born and still unsure of their own meanings, crawling around her ankles, gathering in the grooves of her boots, trying to name the terrible forward motion of a girl who had outrun one ending and found herself inside the mouth of another.

Maren ran across the first paragraph as it formed.

The letters buckled beneath her, textured, ridged like black roots pressed through frost. Loops became stones. Periods sank into the page and deepened into seeds. The long, elegant arms of consonants stretched upward, hardening into saplings with bark the color of fresh ink.

Chapter One was finding its body.

The blankness behind her sealed as she passed, folding itself into memory, then into paper, then into something no reader would see unless they knew where to look. Ahead, the words came faster, no longer individual or careful, but rushing in black streams beneath her feet, spilling into roots, briars, stones, mud. A line of description rose before her like a wall, then broke apart just in time to become fog. She plunged through it, and the wet gray clung to her hair, her lashes, her lips, as if the book were tasting the girl it had been given.

A small figure running across a field of white.

A dark sentence chasing her.

A forest blooming from every footstep.

Trees split the air in front of her, leaves still glossy with ink.

The page was gone.

The book had become ground.

And Maren ran on.

2: RUN

Maren’s first coherent thought, as the world she had just rewritten tried to collapse behind her, was that she really should have worn better shoes.

Pain shot up through her arches and into her knees each time her boots struck earth. They were ridiculous boots for survival, fine enough for court floors and useless against mud, stones, and roots that hooked for her ankles like fingers.

Her ruined gown dragged at her calves, heavy with ink and forest filth, determined to make itself the final obstacle between Maren and escape.

After everything, it would be the dress that killed her.

She ran anyway.

The forest took her, dark and oddly close. Wind worried the branches overhead. The ground rose and dipped without warning, a patchwork of slick leaves and hidden stones.

Her breath tore in and out, too loud in the hush, each inhale dragging cold along the back of her throat until it burned.

Behind her, somewhere, a Court was ripping itself apart, but she did not look back.

If she turned and saw the ruin, she might stop.

If she stopped, she might scream.

If she screamed, she might go back.

So she didn’t. She kept running like all of it could catch up to her.

The burn over her sternum flared with every jolt. The spot where the pendant had kissed her skin and gone dead felt raw and furious, as if someone had pressed a brand there in the shape of a circle and then decided to set it alight.

Sweat stuck the torn bodice to the wound, fabric grinding against new flesh. Light pulsed faintly through the tears, constellation scars flickering under her skin like a sky she could not peel off.

Her body tried to file complaints. Her brain stamped them all with the same answer:

Run.

Branches whipped at her arms, tearing little comets into her skin. Leaves slapped her face. A twig caught in her hair. The forest had opinions, and none of them involved accommodating panicked ex–Story Keepers.

A low branch cut across her path, and Maren ducked too late.

Bark caught the point of her shoulder and scraped through the torn sleeve. Pain drove deep into the joint, hot and sickening, then spilled down her arm in a sharp, tingling rush that made her fingers clench uselessly. She stumbled sideways, slapping a palm against a trunk, while the whole forest narrowed to the ache under her collarbone, the mud under her boots, the ugly scrape of air in her throat.

What now?

The question came without poetry. No prophecy. No grand shape of fate. Just the practical, humiliating demand of a girl with one bruised shoulder, two ruined feet, and a collapsing immortal realm somewhere behind her.

A Court of Chaos was tearing itself apart. Every rule inside it was torn too. Doors. Bargains. Names. It’s fragile logic that had held revels and monsters and impossible rooms together around Sevryn’s grin. He was alive in there. She knew that with the same furious certainty with which she knew her own heart was still beating. Alive, and trapped inside the wreckage she had made when she chose herself over his ending.

Penny was in Eldenwick, if mercy still existed in any useful quantity. Penny with her yellow apron and bright crown of herbs. Penny, who might be waking to ordinary smoke from ordinary ovens, or might already be watching wishfires crawl over the cobbles because Maren Greenbriar had once wanted wonder badly enough to invite disaster in.

And Maren had nothing.

No Court.

No coin.

No clever doorway waiting to open because she had finally thought of a better sentence.

Only the forest. Only the dark. Only the brutal fact that away was not a plan.

But, she thought, it was still better than stopping.

Stopping meant the story had caught her. Stopping meant Sevryn had been right to look at her like he already knew she would fail. She could almost see him ahead of her, not chasing, waiting between the trees with that terrible patience of his, coin turning over his knuckles as if escape had only been another choice he had allowed her to make.

The thought put fresh terror into her legs.

Maren ran until the forest blurred into pieces: root, stone, branch, breath. Her lungs burned past usefulness. The cold dragged raw over the back of her throat. Her calves shook so hard each step felt borrowed from a body that had already given up.

Still, she did not stop.

Not when her boots sank into mud. Not when brambles scored new lines across her shins. Not when the burned place over her sternum flared with every jolt, searing her skin over and over again.

She would not fail.

She would never give him that satisfaction over her ever again.

Her ankle twisted against a hidden stone, and pain snapped up her leg so sharply her breath broke. She caught herself against the nearest trunk with both hands, nails biting into wet bark, and nearly shoved away again on instinct.

But her body refused.

She could only stand there shaking, forehead nearly touching the tree, breath tearing in and out of her like something with claws.

Without her tearing through the forest, it now stood as a silent beast.

There was distant water somewhere downhill, leaves shifting overhead. Tiny sounds. Useless sounds. Sounds with too much space around them.

Her ears kept reaching for more.

No music.

No revels.

No laughter.

Only the woods, and her own heart battering itself against the burned place in her chest.

She hated the silence.

The Court had been monstrous, but it had never been empty. It had never left her alone inside her own skull. It had always watched, always shifted, always filled the air with some new impossible threat. It had crowded every breath with danger.

This forest gave her nothing to fight except pain, darkness, and the widening knowledge that she had no idea where she was.

The silence made her want to crawl out of her skin.

Her fingers curled against the bark until the roughness bit under her nails and she swallowed against the rawness in her throat.

No.

Then she pushed off the tree.

She forced her legs into motion. She could not run anymore. Her legs had gone loose beneath her, her feet half numb inside ruined boots. But she could move.

So she moved.

A stagger first. Then a limping, stubborn walk through the damp underbrush, one hand pressed over the burn at her chest as if she could hold herself together by force.

The sky between the branches showed a thin slice of night softening to bruised purple.

Where are you?

She finally asked herself. The question dropped into her head with the weight of a stone into water.

Her mind started scrambling in a different direction, clawing for maps. For the thick old atlas her father had dragged out once, laughing as he pointed at their world. For the routes traders took through the villages. For anything that told her where this particular cluster of trees belonged.

The Court’s tear had spat her into trees. Woods north of the old roads, maybe? South? Could have thrown her outside the map entirely for all she knew.

Her stomach twisted.

Eldenwick. She had to reach Eldenwick.

If wishfires were spreading, if wild stories were breaking loose from the Court’s collapse, if Penny was anywhere near it…

Panic clawed up her throat. She crushed it down and let anger swell in its place. Anger had teeth. Panic just shook.

He had lied.

Not in single clean cuts she could point to. In the big thing. The shape of their whole story. He had written her into a role and smiled while she bled for it. He had called it “fixing” her. “Refining” her. As if she weren’t more shattered now than before he forced his way into her life.

The trees blurred. She blinked hard until they narrowed to sensible shapes again.

If he had written her, then she’d rip up every page.

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